Another Editing Session

Today, we continued to edit and our teacher Rebecca came along to check out some of our editing.
These were the stuff she said that we should alter :

• cut the barrier and delete whats underneath
• take off the page peel
• make the end of the second chorus longer so the audience can see a longer shot of the female artist
• use transitions to make the shot sharper
• remove some of the slight gapes
• get rid of the tripod part
• check out the darkness
• Replace by adding split screen