Pitch for Digi Pak and Advertisment

Today i presented both my digipak and advert to my teacher and she was pleased with the ideas that i had and thought they were effective and with a few changes, i can start to make the digi pak and adverton photoshop.
The changes were:

• Instead of using graffiti fonts, keep it simple and try using fonts from photoshop elements
• Change the way you have positioned the 'D' for the artist title and also the name of the album (dont stick it on the edge at the bottom, raised in just a little bit.
• You have forgotten to write the copyright / company / added the record label and etc on both the advert and digipak !!
• 'Out Now' should be a little bigger than the information that is there